Line Editing: Bringing Your Love Story to Life

Writing romance isn’t just about telling a story—it’s about making readers feel. The emotions, the tension, the chemistry—every word matters when crafting a love story that lingers in a reader’s heart. That’s where line editing comes in. Often called stylistic editing, this is where your story gets the care and attention it deserves—where the rhythm of your sentences, the tone of your dialogue, and the flow of your scenes all come together to create something deeply immersive and unforgettable. Line editing isn’t about stripping away your voice—it’s about bringing it out even stronger. It’s about making sure your prose flows beautifully, your characters’ emotions land exactly as intended, and your readers stay hooked from the first spark to the final, heartwarming moment. Your love story deserves to be felt in its most powerful, heartfelt form—and I’m here to help make that happen. 💖

What is Line Editing?

Line editing is where your manuscript finds its rhythm, emotional depth, and true voice. It’s not just about fixing words—it’s about enhancing the way your story is told so that every sentence flows beautifully, every scene carries emotional weight, and every moment resonates exactly as you intended.

💖 Clarity, Style, and Voice

Your voice is what makes your story special. Line editing ensures it shines through with clarity and confidence, helping each sentence communicate the right emotion, tone, and atmosphere so readers are fully immersed.

💖 Refining Language for Emotional Impact

Does your writing evoke the right emotions? Are your characters’ feelings coming through as powerfully as they should? Line editing hones your prose to make sure every heartbeat, every glance, and every touch feels real and deeply felt.

💖 Scene and Paragraph Flow

Even when your plot is strong, sometimes scenes or paragraphs need slight adjustments to strengthen their impact. Line editing smooths transitions, enhances pacing, and makes sure every moment lands exactly as it should.

What’s Included in Line Editing?

Line editing goes beyond just fixing sentences—it’s about refining your story at the sentence level so every word carries weight, every scene flows effortlessly, and every moment draws readers deeper into your love story. Here’s how I help:

💖 Stylistic Refinement

Your story’s tone, pacing, and flow are essential to creating an emotional experience for your readers. I fine-tune your sentences to make sure every scene feels natural, engaging, and emotionally resonant.

💖 Deep POV & Immersive Storytelling

Romance shines when readers feel completely connected to your characters. I’ll help you strengthen point of view, making emotions, thoughts, and sensations come to life authentically so readers are right there, feeling every moment.

💖 Show vs. Tell Enhancements

Romance isn’t just about telling a love story—it’s about making readers experience it. I’ll guide you in crafting vivid, sensory-rich scenes that immerse your audience in every stolen glance, lingering touch, and whispered confession.

💖 Tightening & Refining Language

Every word matters in romance. I’ll ensure your prose is polished, purposeful, and emotionally impactful, making each moment between your characters feel authentic and unforgettable.
With line editing, your romance novel becomes an immersive, emotionally gripping experience—one that lingers in readers’ hearts long after they turn the last page.

Pricing

Transparent Pricing

My line editing fees are based on word count, offering a clear, upfront cost with no surprises. This allows you to budget with confidence and focus on what matters most: bringing your love story to life.

20,000 words

$800

40,000 words

$1,600

50,000 words

$2,000

70,000 words:

$2,800

80,000 words

$3,200

90,000 words:

$3,600

What You’ll Receive

Line editing isn’t just about refining your manuscript—it’s about supporting you as a writer while ensuring your story is the best version of itself. Here’s what you’ll receive at the end of the process:

💖 Tracked Changes Version

A document showing every suggested edit, so you have full control over what to accept or modify. Your voice remains yours—I’m just here to enhance it, not change it.

💖 Clean Version

A fully polished manuscript with all suggested edits seamlessly incorporated, allowing for effortless readability.

💖 Style Sheet

A document outlining key editorial decisions (spelling preferences, punctuation choices, and formatting consistency)—perfect for series authors or manuscripts moving to proofreading.

💖 Editorial Report

A thoughtful, detailed breakdown highlighting your manuscript’s strengths and areas for refinement, including: This report includes:✨ Examples from your own manuscript so you can see what’s working and what could be enhanced.✨ Supportive feedback that helps you grow as a writer.✨ Additional resources to empower you for future projects and revisions.

Optional Add-On: Conscious Language Check

Words hold power, and as language evolves, it’s important to ensure your story resonates exactly as you intend. With this optional add-on, I’ll carefully review your manuscript to identify words or phrases that might unintentionally alienate or distract readers—so your story stays true to your vision while keeping readers immersed.
💖 This isn’t about censorship—it’s about awareness. My goal is to help you make intentional choices that align with your story while ensuring every reader feels deeply connected to your characters and their journey.

My Approach: Editing with Heart

Working with me is about more than just refining words—it’s about partnership, encouragement, and bringing your story to life in a way that feels true to you. I’m here to celebrate your progress, support your vision, and offer thoughtful, compassionate guidance every step of the way.

💖 Tools for Success

Every suggestion I offer isn’t just about strengthening this book—it’s about giving you insights and skills that will help every story you write moving forward. My goal is to help you grow as a writer while refining your manuscript.

💖 Collaboration, Not Control

Your story is yours. Always. My role isn’t to rewrite your voice—it’s to enhance what’s already there so your storytelling shines. Every suggestion is just that—a suggestion. You’re in full control of what feels right for your book.

💖 Empathy & Support

Writing is deeply personal, and I know how vulnerable it can feel to share your work. You’ve poured your heart into this story, and I’m here to honor that with care, respect, and encouragement. My goal is to make sure you feel safe, supported, and excited about your book’s journey.
At the end of the day, I’m not just an editor—I’m your partner in bringing your love story to life.

Let’s Bring Your Love Story to Life

You’ve put your heart into this manuscript—every emotion, every moment, every word. Now, it’s time to give it the care and attention it deserves.
Together, we’ll refine your story, ensuring it’s not just everything you’ve dreamed of—but even more. A romance that captivates, lingers, and stays with readers long after the final page. 💖 Are you ready to elevate your love story? Let’s shape it one sentence at a time—together.
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Heartfelt Editorial Services Office Hours
❤ Monday - Thursday: 9:00 AM - 3:00 PM CST (Focused on editing work, client emails, and administrative tasks.) ❤ Friday: 10:00 AM - 1:00 PM CST (Finalizing projects, client follow-ups, and administrative work.) ❤ Lunch Break: 12:00 PM - 1:00 PM CST ❤ Weekends & Federal Holidays: Closed ❤ Please note: Email responses are typically handled between 1:00 PM - 3:00 PM, Monday through Thursday. This allows me to dedicate focused time to your manuscript during editing hours.